Comments and suggestions solicited

[FierceKitty]

Would anyone care to have a look at my campaign rules, not yet even proofread, and let me have useful comments?

[Duke Speedy of Leighton]

Will do ( madlemmey at hotmail dot com)

[Lord Kermit of Birkenhead]

Yes certainly.

IanS

[FierceKitty]

Wos yr email?

[Ithoriel]

kingofkish at blueyonder dot co dot uk

[FierceKitty]

The email's been bounced, Ithoriel.

[Duke Speedy of Leighton]

Reply sent, basically 

[Lord Kermit of Birkenhead]

ianrshaw at btinternet dot com and copy to ianrshaw1954 at gmail dot com.

Ta la

IanS

[Hertsblue]

Yes, bung 'em through, FK.

[FierceKitty]

Refresh my memory - your email?

[Hertsblue]

On my profile.

[FierceKitty]

Sent. By the way, an obvious typo: army basic pay is 500, not 5, 000, per season.
Ian, I can't see your comments.

[Lord Kermit of Birkenhead]

Should be in red. Saw and commented on the typo.....

IanS

[FierceKitty]

Ta.

[Ithoriel]

Sorry FK, not sure what happened with my email, will sort it when I get home.

Try ithoriel at blueyonder dot co dot uk meantime.