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Title: Pendraken - A haiku.
Post by: Duke Speedy of Leighton on 17 July 2025, 11:51:59 AM
The excitement of the thud.
Leon delivers,
Old projects revisited.
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Post by: Last Hussar on 17 July 2025, 12:03:25 PM
 =D>  =D>  =D>
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Post by: FierceKitty on 17 July 2025, 12:39:17 PM
Honourable Duke's syllable count way off! So sorry.
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Post by: Duke Speedy of Leighton on 17 July 2025, 12:51:12 PM
Quote from: FierceKitty on 17 July 2025, 12:39:17 PMHonourable Duke's syllable count way off! So sorry.
Line two editted now
Modernist for me
I use 7, 5, 7
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Post by: Gwydion on 17 July 2025, 01:02:03 PM
Once more the old sound
Pendraken happy landing
old projects reborn
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Post by: fsn on 17 July 2025, 05:39:02 PM
:)
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Post by: Raider4 on 17 July 2025, 07:29:37 PM

QuoteI use 7, 5, 7
Yer doing it wrong.
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Post by: mollinary on 17 July 2025, 08:56:08 PM
5/7/5??????
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Post by: Duke Speedy of Leighton on 17 July 2025, 09:51:47 PM
Quote from: mollinary on 17 July 2025, 08:56:08 PM5/7/5??????
7-5-7" structure in haiku refers to a non-traditional format where the lines have 7, 5, and 7 syllables respectively, deviating from the common 5-7-5 pattern. While traditional Japanese haiku follows the 5-7-5 morae structure (with adjustments for English translation), the 7-5-7 form is a variation sometimes adopted in English-language haiku, particularly in free-form or modern styles. This structure aims to capture a moment or observation, often with a seasonal reference, in a concise and evocative way.